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Draft: At the Stroke of Midnight

  • anushkaumap
  • May 2
  • 3 min read

Prompt: End your story with a kiss at midnight.

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The Brainstorm (27.04.2025 - 01.05.2025)


24 hrs to be with him before you have to tell him who you are.


At midnight (as the clock strikes)

"I..." <-- kiss?

"I know, I've always known" he says <-- kiss?

"I'm never letting go", he whispers on my lips

or

"I never forgot", he whispers - then go into flashback

What do the 24 hours look like?

  • running around the streets of city (Prague?)

    • showing her Prague

  • ice-cream, gelato

    • The ball will be in winter, so this won't work. Maybe hot chocolate?

  • Wishing well

  • ball?? (Is he royalty or really rich?)

Who is he?

  • Really rich, a billionaire's son or has his own business? - architecture firm

  • Name? - Nikolas Bartos (common Czech last names - as per Google), age? - 30

  • Features? - brown hair, blue eyes, wavy hair, formal dressing sense (winter coat, formal/office black pants with belt, hair slightly gelled/combed back, checkered brown/beige scarf), about a head taller than Milena


Who is she?

  • Works in his business as?? - Junior interior designer

    • newly joined and moved to Prague (it's been 2 weeks)

  • Knew (maybe loved?) each other when they were younger (first love?), just moved back to Prague after years (how old - her 13, him 14, but grown up together )

    • Doesn't think Nikolas would remember...

  • Name? - Milena Ambroz (common Czech names - as per Google), age? - 29

  • Features? - light brown hair, brown eyes, dressing sense (think stockings and turtle neck dress, fuzzy earmuffs, cream coat)



The Research (27.04.2025 - 01.05.2025)


Austrian Ball - https://www.ballderoesterreicher.cz/en  last stop of the night (8 pm)

Places to visit


FRANZ KAFKA!!!!!


The Story Timeline (01.05.2025 - ____)


Whose perspective? - First story, her perspective. Later, write a version in his perspective.

Her Perspective (01.05.2025)

  • Overview

    • Left Prague at the age of 13, only to return 16 years later in the hopes of returning to the roots she left behind. A part of her always thought of Nikolas, and as his business grew, she was able to know more about who he had become from afar.

  • The Present

    • Goes to a cafe to enjoy a break, and has only been in Prague for 1 week now. Nikolas comes up to her at the cafe, buys the drink for her and asks her for the one day as a date

      • He calls her miláčku (sweetheart) the whole time

    • She hesitantly agrees, even though disheartened that he didn't recognise her, she decides to give it a day to enjoy his company because that is all that she will get.

    • He takes her on the date (going to the different places in the sequence decided in the research section)

    • Ball at night, dancing that particular dance (see above), at midnight she tries to step away from the dance "I can't anymore...", he holds her in place "I know..."

  • The Past (flashbacks)

    • Sweet memories of them growing up

      • the "I will love you forever", "you have been the only one" memories

    • Her leaving

      • left without a single word, cause she was too scared to say goodbye.

His Perspective - Coming soon

  • Overview


  • The Present


  • The Past (flashbacks)




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